An unedited bit from a superhero project called "The Scarlet Ribbon". Just tossing characters at each other to see how they react. Bulletproof is a pain in the ass to write. She’s supposed to be a cocky young upstart, but she’s more of a loud, confrontational jerkface so far.
Still trying to figure out Ribbon’s voice, too.
I should write up some character profiles for this thing.
Any comments are appreciated.
Bulletproof waited for me in Ghost Town, on the corner of Johns and Tomasi. She wore civilian clothes, like promised. Seeing her out of costume was jarring. With out the spiked pink hood and neon makeup, she was very normal. Plain, even.
“Took you long enough,” she said when she saw me. “I was beginning to think you chickened out.”
She looked me over from head to toe and sneered.
“What?” I asked.
“I was expecting Peter Parker, not Tony Stark.”
( My outfit was a bit much. )
Still trying to figure out Ribbon’s voice, too.
I should write up some character profiles for this thing.
Any comments are appreciated.
Bulletproof waited for me in Ghost Town, on the corner of Johns and Tomasi. She wore civilian clothes, like promised. Seeing her out of costume was jarring. With out the spiked pink hood and neon makeup, she was very normal. Plain, even.
“Took you long enough,” she said when she saw me. “I was beginning to think you chickened out.”
She looked me over from head to toe and sneered.
“What?” I asked.
“I was expecting Peter Parker, not Tony Stark.”
( My outfit was a bit much. )




