OOC: Concrit/Questions
Dec. 22nd, 2022 11:58 amAm I doing an okay job with Barry? Do I need improvement? Barry's a pretty new muse for me and I might get some things wrong without realizing it. So if you see any mistakes or if his characterization begins to slip, please let me know. Feedback is both welcome and helpful. If you have any questions or suggestions, please leave a comment here.
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Nov. 12th, 2015 03:24 pmBarry wasn't sure how much time had passed since he'd woken up to the discovery that his legs no longer worked. He knew he's drifted in and out of consciousness a couple of times since then, but between the pain and the awful realization that he couldn't feel his legs, he'd begun to lose track of time somewhere along the line. He had no idea how long he'd been lying there. How long it's been since Zoom nearly killed him in front of the people he cared about.
It could have been hours. It could have been minutes.
He'd ask his friends, but he suspected they were all in the cortex, worrying about him where he couldn't hear them. Not that he could blame them. He was worried too. He couldn't beat Zoom like this. He couldn't help anyone like this. For now, he was stuck on the slow track just like everyone else.
The sound of footsteps pulled him away from these thoughts. Clark. Of course he'd have heard about what happened by now. The whole world probably knew. But the whole world wouldn't worry like Clark would.
"Hey, Clark."
It could have been hours. It could have been minutes.
He'd ask his friends, but he suspected they were all in the cortex, worrying about him where he couldn't hear them. Not that he could blame them. He was worried too. He couldn't beat Zoom like this. He couldn't help anyone like this. For now, he was stuck on the slow track just like everyone else.
The sound of footsteps pulled him away from these thoughts. Clark. Of course he'd have heard about what happened by now. The whole world probably knew. But the whole world wouldn't worry like Clark would.
"Hey, Clark."
Permissions
Dec. 22nd, 2014 12:35 pmCHARACTER NAME: Barry Allen
CHARACTER SERIES: The Flash
[OOC]
Backtagging: Sure
Threadhopping: Sure
Fourthwalling: Ask first
Offensive subjects (elaborate): None that I can think of.
[IC]
Hugging this character: Go for it.
Kissing this character: Sure
Flirting with this character: Sure
Fighting with this character: Sure
Injuring this character (include limits and severity): Sure, I'm cool with all minor injuries. I'm cool with serious injuries too as long as nothing gets chopped off. He heals pretty quickly.
Killing this character: Ask first and maybe we can plot something out.
Using telepathy/mind reading abilities on this character: Sure, just give me a heads up first.
Warnings: Barry's a vigilante with superspeed. He's also a pretty decent fight. As long as you're not going around hurting people right in front of him, it probably won't be a problem.
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CHARACTER SERIES: The Flash
[OOC]
Backtagging: Sure
Threadhopping: Sure
Fourthwalling: Ask first
Offensive subjects (elaborate): None that I can think of.
[IC]
Hugging this character: Go for it.
Kissing this character: Sure
Flirting with this character: Sure
Fighting with this character: Sure
Injuring this character (include limits and severity): Sure, I'm cool with all minor injuries. I'm cool with serious injuries too as long as nothing gets chopped off. He heals pretty quickly.
Killing this character: Ask first and maybe we can plot something out.
Using telepathy/mind reading abilities on this character: Sure, just give me a heads up first.
Warnings: Barry's a vigilante with superspeed. He's also a pretty decent fight. As long as you're not going around hurting people right in front of him, it probably won't be a problem.
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